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Maria (Linnesby essays)'s avatar

Wonderful, poems and surrounding text both!

I especially like this:

“Sun,

come down upon the ground

and spread your feet upon its chill.

Let them drink you to dregs

the cold mountain streams,

and the frozen reeds in the river”

and won’t forget it. At the same time, it’s disjointed, do you agree? Unless I suppose the dregs are each day’s dregs of sunlight at the end of the day, rather than the sun’s light itself.

But I find myself both caught by the image and frustrated by it, which means that it has added something.

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

'wind is the wind is the wind

and the night is alive

as any of us

joyously singing

in a language so old

only the earth

understands'

LOVE this Dick!!

More.

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