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Sherman Alexie's avatar

"How many monkeys are you?" !!!!!!!

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Dick Whyte's avatar

Such a great line! 🖤

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Ann Collins's avatar

Dick, I love the way you braided the thoughts of Kreymborg, Deleuze & Guattari, Judith Butler together with poetry fragments. As always, it is so timely and fresh. Here we are today, cycling through the same set human yearnings for more peace and more understanding. The heartbreak of it all. Food for the poets--then and now.💛

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Dick Whyte's avatar

Aw thanks Ann - love that you got that. Yeah agreed - we must yearn at least, even in the face of such a shitshow. Food for our bellies, food for our brains. 🖤

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Ann Collins's avatar

💛

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Fotini Masika's avatar

Sing, sing!

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Dick Whyte's avatar

SING! 🖤

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Thomas Rist's avatar

The last line of “The Tree” made me smile. Altogether enjoyable post.

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Dick Whyte's avatar

Hehe - yeah, it's a banger :-) Cheers Thomas.

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

'The will that kills the will to die.' There are so many great lines in these poems, Dick. Your response is spot on, as always. Thanks for what you do.

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Dick Whyte's avatar

Aw cheers Rod - really appreciate it. Yeah, Kreymborg has a knack for spitting bars. Good lines abound. 🖤

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Kerry Sutherland's avatar

I can't

shape this thing

alone.

sigh

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Dick Whyte's avatar

Yeah - one of my favourite moments in a poem ever. Big sigh. 🖤

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Hasse's avatar

These feel ahead of their time to me. Wide and existential, but playfully distinct and specific. The monkey one is great!

Love your poem. I have my own interpretation of it, that is sort of similar to one I published last month: https://heartsontheline.substack.com/p/the-golden-thread

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