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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Both beautiful poems. The second got my attention more because I was thinking the last line, is the longest, and it reflects how we accumulate experiences and it's at the highest point at the end of one's life. So few words, so much meaning. The first had a sound to it that connects as you read it loud.

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Luis A. Estable's avatar

I enjoyed these poems, but more so the longest one. Under the seemingly contradictory verses lies some truth. Good work!

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