Forgotten Poems #93 || Reissue #10
This part struck me:
Walked with me in the wind
To the eyebrow of a hill.
And wordlessly
We talked.
Thanks, Dick!
Aw that's such a beautiful moment Rod. "The eyebrow of a hill" is such a banger of an image. :-)
Magnificent!
your poem strikes me as an echo of the first you have listed of hers - I love that.
Aw cheers Kerry! I love that you noticed that :-)
“Do you suppose
I could build her up again
With only a mouth to start from?”
What a strong image that is…💛
Yeah that poem blows me away 🖤 I can't quite put my finger on it - but there's something in the second half that moves me deeply.
yeah me too. . . i don’t know. . .a poem like this is like an old faded photo of a place we’ve all been before—but this time we see it from a wider angle. . .noticing the light, the wind, the shared silence.
Aw love that 🖤
These are so delightful. I especially love the one titled "Poem" about food as a poem and the cucumber slices and the lily pad.
Yeah, that poem has some great moments. Poetry as food! Love that.
little gods
unborn
!!
Awww thanks Kim 🖤
This part struck me:
Walked with me in the wind
To the eyebrow of a hill.
And wordlessly
We talked.
Thanks, Dick!
Aw that's such a beautiful moment Rod. "The eyebrow of a hill" is such a banger of an image. :-)
Magnificent!
your poem strikes me as an echo of the first you have listed of hers - I love that.
Aw cheers Kerry! I love that you noticed that :-)
“Do you suppose
I could build her up again
With only a mouth to start from?”
What a strong image that is…💛
Yeah that poem blows me away 🖤 I can't quite put my finger on it - but there's something in the second half that moves me deeply.
yeah me too. . . i don’t know. . .a poem like this is like an old faded photo of a place we’ve all been before—but this time we see it from a wider angle. . .noticing the light, the wind, the shared silence.
Aw love that 🖤
These are so delightful. I especially love the one titled "Poem" about food as a poem and the cucumber slices and the lily pad.
Yeah, that poem has some great moments. Poetry as food! Love that.
little gods
unborn
!!
Awww thanks Kim 🖤