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Fotini Masika's avatar

Love, love, love!

D. C. Wilkinson's avatar

Superb.

Dick Whyte's avatar

Aw thanks so much! Really appreciate it.

rena's avatar

Joyfully innocent

Dick Whyte's avatar

Hehe - yeah, that says it all. :-) So long ago now!

LeeAnn Pickrell's avatar

Oh, wow, these are just fabulous, Dick. I love their rhythm and how it intertwines with the imagery.

Dick Whyte's avatar

Thanks so much LeeAnn! So glad these resonated, and I really appreciate the comment on the rhythm and imagery.

Kim Nelson's avatar

The entanglement of young love and lust in these brief poems is palpable, hearkening anyone who had such a relationship back to those heated days.

Dick Whyte's avatar

You’ve nailed it Kim - thank you so much for the thoughtful comment, really appreciate it. Certainly takes me back and I am so glad they resonated enough to remind you of that particular kind of young love. :-)

Cynthia's avatar

🖤🖤🖤