Sea on the Jetty confirms my mental age hahahahahhahaha! I couldn't help but read it out loud! Hope no one heard that! The first one is the contour of a face. See? Poetry is fun!
Haha - of course! So did I :-) I think you'd be cheating yourself out of something pretty special if you didn't ;-) Check out the Kurt Schwitter's Noise Poems linked at the bottom and you can hear me read out some sound poems like this - it is pretty funny! Haha. I love that you saw a face in the first one - looking at the typography of the original (it was very hard to paginate on here!) I don't think it's meant to be (I'll include it in the notes post if you want to see it)? I could be wrong, but I think it's a loving description of a penis - which makes sense when you see some of his queer illustration work. :-) But love the face reading! Realised I forgot the line in the middle too - so have added it now! Lol - long day.
It was more obvious in the email as it showed up as more compact than on the page. Will have a second look... Nah actually I'm good... Face it is. Yeah you can include the face comment if you want.
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hehe - you always know the bits to pick out :-)
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This guy was a roar of those special '20's!
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Sea on the Jetty confirms my mental age hahahahahhahaha! I couldn't help but read it out loud! Hope no one heard that! The first one is the contour of a face. See? Poetry is fun!
Haha - of course! So did I :-) I think you'd be cheating yourself out of something pretty special if you didn't ;-) Check out the Kurt Schwitter's Noise Poems linked at the bottom and you can hear me read out some sound poems like this - it is pretty funny! Haha. I love that you saw a face in the first one - looking at the typography of the original (it was very hard to paginate on here!) I don't think it's meant to be (I'll include it in the notes post if you want to see it)? I could be wrong, but I think it's a loving description of a penis - which makes sense when you see some of his queer illustration work. :-) But love the face reading! Realised I forgot the line in the middle too - so have added it now! Lol - long day.
It was more obvious in the email as it showed up as more compact than on the page. Will have a second look... Nah actually I'm good... Face it is. Yeah you can include the face comment if you want.
Definitely a face!
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